A Returning Voice
July 18 2025
For the Roseneath Writers Circle Monthly assignment
Photo by: Sandy Millar (@sandym10) | Unsplash Photo Community
As darkness settled over Mesher farm Bert had just finished his chores. He cleaned up best he could in the barn. Vicki had objected to him cleaning up in the house so he washed himself down the best he could in the barn before going to the house for a shower. As he reached the back door Vicki stepped outside.
“Have you seen Carrie?” she asked.
“Not since lunch,” Bert replied. “She’s not in the house?”
“No. She said she was going for a walk down to the stream but that was hours ago. I expected her to be back by now.”
“Don’t worry….” started Bert.
“I’m not worried,” snapped Vicki.
Bert gave her a look as he reached out and hugged her. Vicki quickly evaded his touch as she started towards the path through the woods.
“Wait,” he called out. “Let me get my flashlight.”
When he returned Vicki stood frozen in the farmyard. As Bert approached her he could see that she was holding something.
“What is it?” he asked.
Vicki held up a shoe. “It’s hers,” she said.
Bert called out. “Carrie! Carrie!” as they walked towards the path with nerves pushing their muscles. As they stepped into the woods Bert’s light caught another object.
“What is it?” asked Vicki, quietly with trepidation.
“The other shoe.” replied Ben as he stooped to pick it up. It looked like it had just fallen off her foot. He swung his light around wildly and then kept moving forward on the path.
A number of steps later Bert’s light caught another object in its swath. As he got closer Vicki pushed quickly past him and plucked the ribbon from the branch.
“I’m scared,” stated Vicki in an agitated voice.
“Carrie,” called Ben in a louder voice. “Carrie.” This continued on for the rest of the path. Their voices boomed out Carrie’s name with increasing urgency. Suddenly Bert stopped at the opening of the path near the river. He swung his flashlight around wildly until he spotted something sitting on the tree stump.
“Carrie!” he called out running forward.
“What is it?” questioned a running Vicki.
“”Carrie!” he called out as he picked up the doll that was sitting on the stump. “It looks like she’s been here,” he said. “Carrie,” he called out again as he swung his light along the banks of the creek. Vicki pulled Carrie’s doll from his arms and cradled it with increasing sobs.
“She’s gone,” cried Vicki.
“Now hush,” replied Bert. “Let’s head back to the house. I will make some phone calls and get a search party going.
While Bert made his phone calls Vicki carried the doll up to Carrie’s room and placed it on her bed. “It will be here for her when she returns,” thought Vicki.
A little while later cars were pulling into the farmyard. With each car, pairs of people were sent out in many directions from the clearing by the stream. By morning all had returned, exhausted with no further signs of Carrie.
Tired beyond exhaustion Bert and Vicki laid down in the rising morning sun to catch a few hours of sleep before resuming their search.
Just as Vicki’s eyes began to close she heard a voice calling from the silence.
“Mama. Mama.” Vicki’s eyes flew open and she raced from the bedroom.
“Mama. Mama” Vicki raced down the hall. She stood in Carrie’s doorway hoping beyond belief that her daughter would be in her bed. She dissolved into tears as she observed the empty room. She walked over and picked up the doll before curling up on the bed. She hugged the doll deeply as she drifted off to sleep.
“Mama, that is too tight,” said Carrie.
Quickly Vicki opened her eyes and screamed.
As Vicki picked herself up off the floor she stared at the doll intently.
“What’s wrong Mama,” asked Carrie.
Vicki stood there mouth agape. “What trickery is this?” she whispered.
“Mama, it’s me. Carrie. You don’t know me?” asked Carrie.
“I know your voice. But you are a doll.” whispered Vicki.
“Mama,” began Carrie.
“Bert!” yelled Carrie at the top of her lungs. “Bert!”
Bert came thundering down the hall in his underwear, grabbing the door frame and sliding into the room. “What’s the emergency?” he asked.
Vicki pointed to the bed where the doll sat. “The doll,” she sputtered. “The doll is talking.”
“Really? What do you mean” Bert asked before he stopped talking and listened carefully.
“How did your voice get inside the doll Carrie?” asked Vicki. The doll sat quietly on the bed. Vicki walked over and picked it up and squeezed the doll. No words were heard.
“When I fell asleep I was hugging the doll. It told me I was hugging it too tight.” She sat the doll down and turned to her husband. “I know what I heard.”
Bert walked over to Vicki and put his arm around her. “I’m sure you thought you did. It is natural that your daughter is missing and all we find is a doll that she once played with. You miss her. I do too.” As they walked through the doorway he turned the light out and closed the door. “Once you get some sleep everything will be ok.”
The next morning Vicki popped her head into the bedroom. She picked up the doll and set it on the bed up against the pillows.
“I sure miss you,” she said quietly.
“But I am here mama,” replied Carrie.
Vicki stared intently as she backed out the room. She walked down the stairs and went outside. Bert was in the barn and would be for a while so she headed down the path to the river.
Bert came into the house for lunch. He noticed that Vicki was not in the kitchen and that lunch was not ready. “That’s unusual," he thought. Bert checked the rest of the house but Vicki was not there. He stepped outside the door and surveyed their vegetable garden.
“I wonder,” he said quietly. He started walking across the field towards the path to the river. He walked carefully along the path until he came to the clearing. He looked towards the stump where Carrie’s doll had sat. His head lowered and he shook it as he walked over to the stump.
“Vicki,” he said as he picked up the Vicki doll. He carefully carried the doll back to the house and climbed the stairs.
“Bert. What’s happened to me,” asked Vicki as Bert reached the top step. He walked towards Carrie’s room, opened the door and walked in.
“Mama!” exclaimed Carrie’s voice. “Now we can be together forever!”
Bert walked over and set Vicki beside Carrie on the bed. “Bert Mesher. What have you done to me?”
There was some thumping from the closet. Bert eyed it carefully before walking over and opening the door. He reached in and picked up the doll that sat on the shelf. Carefully he carried it over to the bed and sat it beside the other dolls.
“Hiya Colin,” said Carrie to her brother. “We are now one big happy family again!”
Vicki’s voice rose to a shriek. “Bert Mesher…..” but Bert was closing the door behind him, shutting out the noise from the sound proof room.
“Alone at last.” he thought to himself looking forward to the quiet days that awaited him. “I think I will get some lunch.”