Wednesday, 30 October 2024

Party On: A One Hundred Word Story

 


Wayne sniffed the air.


“I smell popcorn,” he said with a touch of glee in his voice. 


“And butter,” gushed Garth. “Lots and lots of butter.”


“Over there!” Wayne yelled. He glided over with efficiency.


Stopping five feet away he surveyed the sleeping body by the tree.


Furtively Wayne inched closer until he grabbed the paper bag. It made a noise loud enough to wake the body up.”


“Scat,” yelled the body as Wayne rose quickly past the outstretched hand.


Wayne flew twenty yards when he heard Garth yell “Party on,”  as their enemies flapped their wings to give chase.


Wednesday, 23 October 2024

The Encyclopedia Salesmen

 

It was a hot day. A really, really hot day. And Buddy Fenton had had about enough of it. He’d been tromping all over the Christie Pits area, toting his heavy sample bags around in his sweating palms. Occasionally, he’d duck into a store that might have some air-conditioning so he could cool down a bit. Now he couldn’t even remember where he had parked the car. That would be the next thing, he thought, irritably. He pictured the yellow ticket on the window of the old Ford station wagon. That would cost at least two hours’ worth of work if he couldn’t beat it. He wouldn’t even be able to claim it as a parking expense. The company would never allow it. Damn it!

He stopped for a moment and put the bags down, pulled out a handkerchief and wiped the sweat from his dripping brow. He considered taking off his tie. Surely nobody would expect him to show up at the door in a full suit on a day like this. Not in this heat. But then there were the rules. He decided to keep it on, but he loosened up the Windsor knot of the bright red tie a little.

He pulled out his small, black notebook and checked off a list against the numbers of the houses on this, the last street in the area. Four or five more cold calls and he’d pack it in. Even he, Buddy Fenton, last year’s top road salesman for Encyclopedia Britannica couldn’t be expected to last in this swelter. He perused the nearest houses and settled on a small, pink, semi-detached bungalow with an overly detailed garden and the number 48 in large, green numbers on the blue front door. He chose it because it was the only house not spraying water all over the place. He started up the walk…

Inside number 48 Pendrith Lane, a large man sat at a small table by the window. He was very neatly dressed, with a crisp, white, short-sleeved shirt done up to the neck and his neatly cropped red hair shone slightly from the pomade he made a habit of applying after his shower. He wore heavy, black-rimmed glasses and had a glass of freshly-poured lemonade in front of him, the ice within it already starting to melt. There was no air-conditioning at 48 Pendrith Lane.

He opened a large, leather-bound book which was sitting on the table, the label on the spine indicating that it was a volume of the 1952 Funk & Wagnall’s General Encyclopedia, Letters L through M. He ran his finger smoothly down a column of entries, naming them as he read them.

 “Laps… Legs… Lips… ah, here it is… Loneliness.” He read on. “The state of mind that results from…”

The doorbell rang. He reached for the yellow curtain and pulled it to one side so he could see out. To see who it was. A puzzled look crossed his face, and he let the curtain go. He sat for a moment, not moving. Perhaps the visitor would go away. Then the doorbell rang again. Somehow it seemed louder than the first time but, of course, that was impossible. He stood up and moved to the door. He opened it.

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FIRED!

 Hands in pockets….

“Don’t come back!”

Tuesday, 22 October 2024

Swoop

Sunrise in full fall colour

the sun is the clock

Swoop

One by one in orderly fashion

Youngest first

Swoop

From the perch in the maple

Swoop

Six young turkeys

One by one

From the crimson tree

Swoop

An adult

Perfectly timed and paced

Four more

Swoop

Swoop 

Swoop

Swoop

Flash Fiction

 I have recently been exploring Flash Fiction. For those, like me, who are unaware of how it works I submit the following.

Flash Fiction

There are different genres of flash fiction.


  1. The  six-word story; 

  2. The  280-character story (also known as "twitterature"); 

  3. The  "dribble" (also known as the "minisaga", 50 words) 

  4. The  "drabble" (also known as "microfiction", 100 words)


It’s only 100 words, but your story needs a plot, a who, what, when, where, and why. And, it helps the reader connect if your character has a name. You want your readers to care. This is the challenge. The reader needs to get it all in 100 words.


  1. The Trabble, 300 words.  

  2. Sudden fiction" (750 words) 

  3. Flash fiction " (1,000 words) 

  4. Microstory" (under 300 words)

  5. Postcard fiction
Postcard fiction is just what it sounds like—a story that could fit on a postcard. It's typically around 250 words, but could be as much as 500 or as few as 25. An image often accompanies the text to create the feeling of looking at a postcard, with the reader turning it over to read the inscription on the back.


Rules

  • Use strong imagery. Make every single word count. ...
  • Stick to one moment. Focus on one particular moment in time. ...
  • Work with just one or two characters. Don't spread your story too thin. ...
  • Try first person point of view. ...
  • Surprise your reader. ...
  • Make good use of your title.

Happy writing.

Sunday, 20 October 2024

The Bridge Version 2

If you haven't already you should read version one first.

So I stripped the Bridge down to its most basic plot and began a rewrite of the whole story.  While there are some sentences lifted from the first version verbatim, it is for all intents and purposes a new version. Do you have any preferences? 

I am also giving some thought towards rewriting it again by starting over from the basic plot with no/very little repetition from either version. 

I may be overthinking this one. I like the basic concept. It is in the expression of my intentions where the issue lies.


The Bridge 


It could have been a rhetorical question but I asked it anyway. “What are you doing?”


The women with the plant cutters looked up quickly. “Oh my! You’re here.” she replied. “I am clearing off the train tracks. There is too much brush and other stuff covering the tracks.” She quickly moved a strand of hair away from her face and gave me a rather soothing smile.

“The tracks?” I thought to myself. There are no tracks up here. What is she talking about? I walk this ancient bridge every day. I have never seen train tracks up here. “Are you sure there are tracks?” I asked. “This old bridge has never had a train on it,” I replied.

She gave me a funny look. “All I know is that there is a train coming in this afternoon so I have to clean off the tracks,” she said pointing to the rusty piece of steel she had just uncovered. I quickly walked over and bent down.

“There is a track there,” I said with some consternation. I poked the rail with my toe. “I have crossed this bridge for most of my life and have never, ever seen a train track up here.”

The bridge sat between two very high hills and looked out across the valley below it. The bridge used to be a road between a town that was many miles away and the town down below. What was once a full fledged well used bridge had turned into disuse when the powers that be decided to build a highway along the river’s edge that wound its way up a hill to replace this one. No one got around to tearing it down so now it is a walking path for some and forgotten by most. It provided spectacular views of the town with the river flowing though it for as far as the eye could see. This would be why it was one of my favourite places to walk. The bridge itself was so old I questioned whether a train could even touch the bridge without knocking it down. I shuddered at the thought.

She looked at me with her rather large eyes and smiled. “It is quite beautiful up here,” she said, echoing my thoughts.

“I love it. That’s why I walk here. It is especially pretty in the fall” I replied with a puzzled look and then remembered my manners. “ I am…..” I began.

“Robert Smith,” she said finishing my sentence. I looked at her with surprise. “How..”

“I live not too far from you. I just bought the old Danford farm. We are neighbours!” she replied with glee. She rose from the ground where she was kneeling. “I am Christine, Christine Deville, " she replied as she tucked a strand of hair behind her ear then touched her ear. “Pleased to meet you, at last” she reflected with a hint of happiness in her tone.

I had known about the sale of the farm. It was quite a loss to our community to have the Danfords move away but I was glad that someone who appeared to be industrious had purchased it. “I am pleased to meet you too. You bought the Danford place. Have you done much farming?

“Not a lick of farming in my life.”

“Why the farm then?” I asked, realizing I was probably being a bit nosy.

“Well, I had a hunch that it was the place to be when I saw it. It just felt like home,” she replied with a big smile. The light was reflecting off her pendant.

“You have a nice pendant there,” I reflected.

“This old thing I have had forever.” she said as she tucked it back into her blouse.

“It looked like a train. Does it have a special meaning?” I asked, realizing again that I probably was over stepping with my question.

“It’s a long story,” she replied. “I have to get this track cleared off. Would you like to help me?” she asked with a smile.

I spent a couple of seconds looking at her as I thought about my answer. While I didn’t buy the train angle, I could see that she could use some help clearing the track for whatever purpose that was needed. I could also spend some time getting to know her better since she seemed to live around here. It seemed like the neighbourly thing to do.

“Let’s get at her,” I replied.

She clapped her hands and laughed. “Thank you. You won’t be sorry.”

A bit of puzzlement at that statement left my mind as I stepped forward and moved a large limb out of the way, tossing it near the edge of the bridge. I moved towards the next large limb to help Christine lift it but before I got there she had not only lifted it but heaved it a fair distance away.

“Nice throw,” I intoned.

“Thanks,” she replied. "I've been working up to that one.” Her pendant had fallen out of her blouse so she placed a hand on it and moved to behind her as she bent over to pick another branch. There was a reflection of light from it as it fell over her shoulder tangling itself in the branch she was working on.

We worked for a few minutes clearing branches and pulling rather large wild plants from between the rails. I turned to pick up another branch whe a rip sound, then the sputter, and then the roar of a chainsaw caught my attention. Quickly I turned towards the distraction only to discover that Christine was walking past me towards the tree where she began ripping into the long body of it. She was very adept at using the chainsaw. She de-limbed the tree and began to cut up the log sending showers of wood chips flying through the air. Soon her clothing was covered with them. After she finished the last cut she flipped the switch and shut off the chainsaw.

Christine looked up with a grin. “I‘ve been waiting for that. It feels so good,” and with that statement out of the way she began brushing the wood chips off her clothing and out of her hair.

As she took the chainsaw over to its case I continued clearing the brush she had cut, tossing them off the side of the bridge. While I was working I spent some time thinking about what she had said. The only thing I could accept is that there are train tracks, rails, here on the bridge.

After a bit she indicated we needed to rest. I wandered over and sat on a stump. She offered me a bottle of water which I gratefully accepted. I noticed her pendant again. It was shining brightly even though we were sitting in the shade.

“I can’t help but compliment you on your pendant. It looks like it is almost alive.”

“It is an amulet,” she replied. “An amulet is more special than a pendant. It has some magical engravings on it to help protect me.”

“Why do you need protection?” I inquired.

“In this world there are many things we need protection from,” she replied with a smile and large saucer-like eyes. Tell me how you came to be walking on the bridge this morning?” she inquired.

“I often walk across the bridge later in the day but this morning something said I should take my walk now so here I am. How about you?”

She looked at me carefully. “As I said earlier I had to clear this bridge for the train.”

I looked at both ends of the bridge. We had cleared about 30 feet of track. The rail began abruptly and ended equally abruptly. “I am not sure a train could get here, even if it wanted to,” I intoned. “The track is too short and it goes nowhere.”

“I hear you,” she reflected. “All I know is the train is coming, probably before too long.”

I looked at her with disbelief. “Is it just going to magically appear?” I jokingly questioned.

She laughed along with me and then said, “exactly.”

“Exactly what?” I replied

“It will just magically appear.”

I looked at her and saw no jokes. She reflected a smiling, amused face that was filled with a strong belief in her statement. “It will magically appear? There is no such thing as magic.” I stated confidently.

She looked at me calmly. “Oh Robert, but there is. This amulet that you have been admiring,” she started as she lifted the amulet from where it hung between her breasts, “is my early warning signal about the train appearing.” I must have reflected disbelief on my face when she continued. She held her amulet up to the sunlight. It had a train design surrounded by space except where it met the circle. It was lit up by the bright light of the sun but there was something else about it.

“Are those headlights shining?” I asked with curiosity.

“Indeed they are,” she replied. “The headlights light up 24 hours before the train arrives. It also shakes as a train would shake the ground therefore if you are sleeping or are busy it reminds you of its presence.”

I thought about this for a minute. There was something in her tone of voice and sincerity in her words that had me leaning towards believing her. “Do you know why it is appearing here?” I asked.

“Here, as on the bridge?” she asked. I nodded vigorously.

“I believe that it is because I have chosen to live near the bridge. The bridge is private and a great starting point for my journey. I have loved this spot for a while now and have finally settled here. When I lived in other places the train found me somehow. I had to find the tracks though.”

I was becoming a bit uncomfortable but intensely curious with the conversation.

“Your journey? Other places?” I floundered. It isn’t everyday a beautiful woman tells you she is involved in magic.

“My journey. Yes. I have had many in my life.” Christine paused looking down as if she had to make up her mind about something. “You see Robert, I am a time traveler,” she said looking into my eyes as if she was willing me to believe her. And I was pretty close to doing just that. “There is something about you that has me convinced that telling you my secret is a good thing,” she continued as she glanced at me and then away quickly. “I feel comfortable sharing this information with you.”

“Interesting,” I thought to myself. “I’m not sure what to say to that.” I replied. “Thank you I guess, but it doesn’t quite seem right.”

“I understand,” she replied. “I really haven’t told anyone else about this part of my life.” she said with both eagerness and concern. “I hope you understand.”

I really didn’t but was unsure what to say next. “So,” I began slowly to give myself time to think. “How does this train appear?”

“Well, it just does. I have never really seen it. I just look up or turn around and there it is.”

“You move back and forth in time?” I said, stating the obvious hoping she didn’t misinterpret my thoughts.

“I travel to where I am needed and then I return home.”

“What is it that you do in time?” I asked carefully.

“If I am lucky as little as possible, especially in the past. In the future there is a little more leeway.”I looked at her incredulously. “I know it sounds bizarre,” she continued, “but it is the truth. There is a tipping point in history where the decisions made could go either way. It is my job to ensure that they go the way that history indicates. It is also my job to help preserve the direction that the people indicate the future should be like. It is hard to not interfere but it is essential to reserve the direction the world should take.”

“You can change history?” I asked.

“Not change history. Just to make sure it follows the prescribed path. There are times it needs a slight nudge.”

“Where are you traveling to today?”

She gave me another rather large smile. “I never know. I don’t have any say. I just board the train and then woosh, we are off. All I know is it is an adventure and someone needs my help. People are full of such doubts in their abilities.There is always a chance the person will not follow my advice or nudges that push them where they should go.”

“You have been to the future?” I asked with disbelief.

“I have,” she replied with a twinkle in her eye. She looked away quickly, staring at the ground for a few seconds before looking back up. “You should turn around,” she stated.

Turn around? I looked at her smiling face and realized she wasn’t joking. I turned my head slowly, did a double take and then turned my whole body. My eyes widened as I took in the sight. There stood a gleaming steam engine, complete with a coal car and a passenger car. It was just like her amulet. “How?” I sputtered.

“Magic,” she replied as she rose from her seat on the log. “Now I have to go to work,” she said as she picked up her chainsaw and started walking towards the train.

My wide eyes followed her as she boarded the passenger car. She paused in the doorway, her eyes wide with a knowing smile and said, ”Would you like to join me?”

I reflected on her traveling to the future before replying.

The Bridge Version 1

I finished this version of The Bridge a couple of weeks ago. It didn't quite sit right with me. I presented it at the meeting this week and solicited some thoughts about it. I felt it needed heavy editing and something else I couldn't put my finger on. 

The Bridge


It could have been a rhetorical question but I asked it anyway. “What are you doing?”

The woman looked up, rather startled but quickly caught her composure. “You scared the daylights out of me. I am clearing off the bridge. All this shrubbery has to go. There is a train coming through.”

I looked at her with a quizzical look. The bridge was in the style of ancient Roman bridges. It had seen better days and looked like it would collapse if anything more than a couple of people crossed it at the same time. I looked at both ends of the bridge and saw it heading off into nowhere. Trees, brush, but definitely no path through the woods for a train to traverse the bridge. No rails.”I don't recall the bridge ever being used for trains. Since I have lived here it has been like a wild forest. Some questions were being raised, begging to be asked but until then I remained courteous “Well,” I thought. ”It must be reasonably safe since I cross it everyday on my walk.”

“A train?” I asked.. “Is there a track on the bridge?”

“Most definitely,” she said, lifting a branch. “It’s a little rusty but still there.”

“Would this bridge even hold the weight of a train?” I asked. I walked over and looked. A rusted track was still in place. I reached out with my toe and nudged it. The rail seemed to be solid. “Wouldn’t there need to be other tracks for the train to come in on?”

“I am not sure," she replied. “All I know is these tracks need to be uncovered.”

“I mean I have walked over this bridge many many times over the years and until today I didn’t notice any tracks,” I postulated. “Why would a train use this bridge?”

“Don’t know. Not important,” she said as she moved some more brush from the track. “All I know is that a train is coming and I need to clear this track. Want to help?” she asked, glancing up with a smile.

“I could do that. My name is Robert. Robert Smith.”

She rose from the crouch she was in and said, “My name is Christine Deville.” she reached out a hand, “pleased to meet you.”

We shook hands. I noticed a pendant on a large chain that hung from her neck. A train was framed in the circular border. It was gleaming in the sunlight. I asked her, “How do you know a train is coming?” It seemed like an important question. She turned her eyes ominously towards me. I felt a small shiver run down my spine.

“Look. If you don’t want to help then just buzz off. I don’t have time for this,” she muttered as she turned back towards clearing the track.

Well, I thought. She seems to be lucid enough. She appears to be happy, radiant even, other than when asked a question she doesn’t like. It was also interesting that she is out here. I don’t often encounter other people on my daily walks across the bridge. In fact she would be the first person I have seen in months. I often crossed the bridge as it provided rather dramatic views of the countryside. The town looked quite beautiful from this level and looking past it one could see all the hills and valleys. Fall was especially nice when all the colours were in full view. She looked at me again with her big blue eyes and flashed me a brilliant questioning smile.

“Do you want to help?” she asked.

“Of course,” I replied. “Let’s get it done.” I stepped forward quickly and moved a large limb out of the way, tossing it near the edge of the bridge. I moved towards the next large limb but before I got there she had not only lifted it but heaved it a fair distance away.

“Nice throw,” I intoned.

“Thanks,” she replied. "I've been working up to that one.” She moved her pendant to her back.

“I’ve noticed your pendant keeps getting in the way of where you are working,” I stated.

“It is an amulet,” she replied. “An amulet is more special than a pendant. It has some magical engravings on it to help protect me.”

“Magical engravings,” I thought to myself. It was rather strange that she was pushing this angle. “Why do you need protection?” I inquired. My thoughts towards her began to drift towards some instability on her part, yet she seemed nice enough.

“In a magical world we need protection from all kinds of issues. I appreciate your questions but I really need to get this done,” she replied before heading off to the next section of track.

“Magic?” I mused. “She believes in magic. Well, I said I would help her so I had better get to it.”

I walked towards a rather large branch lying on the ground when I heard a rip sound and the sputter, then the roar of a chainsaw. Quickly I turned towards the distraction only to discover that Christine was walking past me towards the tree where she began ripping into the long body of it. She was very adept at using the chainsaw. She de-limbed the tree and began to cut up the log sending showers of wood chips flying through the air. Soon her clothing was covered with them. After she finished the last cut she flipped the switch and shut off the chainsaw.

Christine looked up with a grin. “I've been waiting for that. It feels so good.” and with that statement out of the way she began brushing the wood chips off her clothing and out of her hair.

As she took the chainsaw over to its case I continued clearing the brush she had cut. In some cases I used the branch trimmers to cut away larger pieces before tossing them off the side of the bridge. While I was working I spent some time thinking about what she had said. I had serious doubts about her true intentions. The only thing I could accept is that there are train tracks, rails, here on the bridge. The rest of her story sounded quite fanciful. It was leading me to believe that she may be a tad loco. After a bit she indicated we needed to rest. I wandered over and sat on a stump. She offered me a bottle of water which I gratefully accepted.

“I have been wondering about this train,” I started.

She looked up at me with careful eyes.

I continued, “I can see there are train tracks but they don’t seem to go anywhere. In fact they begin and end about 30 feet from each other.”

“Yes,” she replied while carefully looking at me through slightly squinting eyes..

“Well,” I began, “it is either a really short train that has to land like a helicopter,”

“Or,” she continued.

“Or it just magically appears.”

“Could be,” she replied. “I am not really clear on that.”

I thought about that for a minute as she continued to watch me carefully. “I am wondering how you know a train is arriving,” I asked with some caution.

Christine smiled a broad smile. “My amulet tells me.”

“Your amulet? How?”

“My amulet,” she says as she holds her amulet up to the sunlight. It had a train design surrounded by space except where it met the circle. It was lit up by the bright light of the sun but there was something else about it.

“Are those headlights shining?” I asked with curiosity as he leaned forward to get a better look at it.

“Indeed they are,” she replied. “The headlights light up 24 hours before the train arrives. It also shakes as a train would shake the ground therefore if you are sleeping or are busy it reminds you of its presence.”

“Fascinating!” I said with awe as I leaned further forward. She pulled back a bit and placed the amulet inside her blouse.

“Have you ever seen it …. land?” I postulated as I was not sure of how the train arrived.

“Never. It always appears when I turn in a different direction so I am not sure how it gets here. It just does.”

I thought about this for a minute. “Do you know why it is appearing here?” I asked.

“Here, as on the bridge?” she asked. I nodded vigorously.

“I believe that It is because I have chosen to live near the bridge. It is private and a great starting point for my journey. I have loved this spot for a while now and have finally settled here. When I lived in other places the train found me somehow. I had to find the tracks though.”

“And now for the million dollar question, why is it here? What is the purpose of it?” I watched her carefully to see her reaction. She simply looked at me and smiled.

“It’s because I am a time traveler.” she watched me carefully as she said this. “It would appear that you have made me comfortable enough to reveal my secret.”

I looked at her with distinct interest. Surely she was putting me on. “A time traveler?” I questioned.

“I know it is hard to believe but I am a time traveler.”

“You hop back and forth in time?”

“I travel to where I am needed and then I return home.”

I looked stunned. “What is it that you do in time?” I asked carefully.

“If I am lucky as little as possible, especially in the past. In the future there is a little more leeway.” Robert looked at her incredulously. “I know it sounds bizarre,” she continued, “but it is the truth. There is a tipping point in history where the decisions made could go either way. It is my job to ensure that they go the way that history indicates. It is also my job to help preserve the direction that the people indicate the future should be like. It is hard to not interfere but it is essential to reserve the direction the world should take.”

“You can change history?” I asked.

“Not change history. Just to make sure it follows the prescribed path. There are times it needs a slight nudge.”

I was both flabbergasted and flummoxed. She is a time traveler. So many questions but I chose the obvious one. “Where are you traveling to today?”

She gave me another rather large smile. “I never know. I don’t have any say. I just board the train and then woosh we are off. All I know is it is an adventure and someone needs my help. People are full of such doubts in their abilities.There is always a chance the person will not follow my advice or nudges that push them where they should go. Look at Julius Caesar. All that advice and still he thought he knew better. There were high hopes for him.”

‘Don’t you stand out in the clothes you wear and the way you talk?

“Not really. I board the train and my clothes change to suit the time frame I am going to. The same thing with the language. Somehow I speak in the native tongue of the period so it has never been a problem.”

“Like magic?”

“Exactly.”

“And what about the train?”

“The train also changes to period transportation. A Roman chariot. A coach. Horse and buggy. You name it, the train has been it.”

“Why are you telling me all this?” I inquired. It seems that she could have just nudged me away from what she was doing and kept on working in secret.

“Indeed. That is an excellent question. Let me ask you this. Why did you cross this bridge this morning?”

I looked at her with a quizzical look. “What do I have to do with your story?”

“I think we will get there. Please answer my question.”

I pondered this silently before answering. “I live over that way,” I said, pointing towards one end of the bridge. “I like walking up here because of the views it affords me. It helps clear my mind. I find that I feel better after this walk.” I paused in thought. I live over there and she lives over there.

“And you helped me readily clear the debris.” she said as she looked down towards the ground.

“Yes,” I replied. “It seemed like a neighbourly thing to do.” The truth was more intense than that. I looked down at the ground and thought that something had pulled me here this morning. I had no intention of going for a walk but, well, here I am. When I saw her something said stop and talk to her. I looked up at her where she had the most beautiful smile.

She looked up at me with a larger smile. “Then turn and look,” she replied.

As I turned my eyes widened. There stood a gleaming steam engine, complete with a coal car and a passenger car. It was just like her amulet. “How?” I sputtered.

“Magic,” she whispered. “And now, I bid you adieu,” she said, rising from her resting place and walking towards the train. She stopped along the way to pick up her chainsaw before proceeding to the steps of the car. My wide eyes followed her as she boarded the passenger car. She paused in the doorway and said, ”Would you like to join me?”


October 2024








Thursday, 17 October 2024

The Picture

This is one of my older stories.


 The Picture


The tiger in the picture was crouched low, hiding behind some fern bushes. If you didn’t look close enough you might even miss seeing the tiger. It blended in very well with the foliage. 


“Mom, tell me about the picture again.” I asked knowing that she was a bit reluctant to share the history behind her obtaining the picture. It had been hanging on our dining room wall as long as I could remember. 


“Oh Tom, you’ve heard this story before.” replied my mom. 


“I know, but I like it.” I had heard it many times but I was always fascinated by the story behind it.


She eyed me suspiciously. “The tiger picture? It was a gift from a student I taught in India. He appreciated my time spent teaching him English and in return he painted me this picture.”  It was with obvious boredom that she didn’t flesh the story out as much as she had in the past.


“And you were in India when?”


“Well it was long ago before I met your father and long before you were born.” she replied as she stepped back into the kitchen to mash the potatoes. It’s not that I think she may be mistaken.  She was there but something about the picture always bothered me. It did not appear to be what it seemed.


I turned to stare at it again for a moment. It wasn’t a normal picture that would hang in anyone’s dining room. Yes it was of a standard size and standard shape. The colors and structure were vivid and lively. There was a sense of breadth and depth that made it seem like it was pulsating. It had a spell binding quality that instantly drew your attention to it when you entered the room. No student had painted this picture. Not by a long shot. And the glass was dirty. This was very weird in our house. My mom was a clean freak if there ever was one.


“Mom, when was the last time you cleaned the glass on this picture?” 


Mom popped her head in the doorway. “Cleaned the glass? Just yesterday why?”


“Because the glass looks like it’s dirty, from the inside.” 


She walked further into the room and stood before the painting. “A little smudged but that happens,” she observed. “I guess I’ll have to clean it again tomorrow.” She went back to peeling her potatoes.


Now I know smudges when I see one and this wasn’t a smudge. It was humidity on the inside of the glass as if someone was breathing on it. I looked again at the tiger. Same place, same spot. Yet there was something different. Something about the eyes. Their intensity had changed. I leaned in for a closer look. Wait! What was that? Was I crazy? It was a picture. It couldn’t mist up. 


“Mom” I called out. 


“What hon?” she answered a bit exasperated.


“I just saw something really bizarre in this picture.” 


Mom returned quickly with a look of concern on her face. 


“What exactly did you see?” she demanded.


“Well, look at this. This smudge has grown larger since you were here the last time. “ I said pointing to the mist on the inside of the picture.


She looked at the picture for a minute. Her breathing was becoming more controlled when she decided to speak. “It is nothing,” she reflected, not taking her eyes from the picture. “Maybe,” she said softly.


“And there is something about the eyes.” I said a little hurriedly.


“The eyes?” questioned my mom as she turned towards me.


“The eyes! They look more focussed.” 


She was looking at me rather quizzically. “I’ll take it apart and clean it tomorrow. Now you need to finish setting the table and forget about the picture. Anyone who has stared at it for long periods of time has had nothing but trouble.’’


I sensed a shift in her tone. What ever did she mean about trouble? From a picture? I was about to ask her but her eyes hinted that enough was enough. I followed her into the kitchen and grabbed the plates and a couple of glasses off the shelves. It’s been me and my mom for what seems like forever. It was good that way. I walked back into the room and took a quick glance at the picture.


The tiger had moved. I don’t mean the picture! I mean the tiger in the picture. It was no longer hidden behind the ferns. It had stepped out into the open and was staring directly at me. I set the dishes down carefully, not taking my eyes off of it. The tiger continued to move around the picture with ease. He was definitely stalking something. If it wasn’t a picture I would think it was me it was stalking.


“Are you going to put those plates and glasses down in the right spots or do we just eat off the table?” she asked with a smirk on her face. “Come and eat,” called Mom as she sat down on her chair. When had she entered the room? I moved to my chair and handed her a plate and a glass. “How was your day?” she inquired. 


“Oh you know,” I mumbled looking at the picture again. I could feel a warm breeze blowing across my face. It sure felt good in contrast to the snow outside. 


“Tom, Earth to Tom!”


I looked at my Mom. 


“Are you with me?” she asked.


“Yeah, yeah, I’m with you.” I said as the sounds of an elephant, and some monkeys in the distance called out. I could smell a strong smell like at the zoo but only quite a bit stronger. Somewhere nearby I heard the unmistakable sound of a large animal walking in the undergrowth. My eyes searched the ferns, hoping to catch a glimpse of whatever it was.


“Tom,” my mother’s voice called gently. “Time for dessert.”


“Huh? Oh yeah.” My eyes refocused. ‘What is going on?’ I thought as I stretched.  “Man I must be tired! I think I’ll pass for now mom. All that heat has me worn out.” She furrowed her brows at that statement but I was just too tired to carry the conversation further so I went to bed. 


I slept in fits and starts, dreaming about jungles and lions and tigers and woke wide awake in a sweat. I had seen the tiger move. I had seen the mist. How could the tiger move if it’s a picture?  


Curiosity got the better of me as I stepped out of bed and headed towards the door. Half way down the hall there was a noise from my mom’s room that made me jump. The snoring then resumed and I continued on my chase. 


I flipped on the dining room light and there was the picture, exactly as it was before. The tiger was back  behind the ferns, crouched low, watching and waiting.  I moved closer to examine the glass but could see no humidity. What was going on? I reached out to touch the frame and ……


The flash of light was immense. It lit the room and shook the house. 


Mom entered the room in the morning and went straight to the tiger picture. It was hanging a bit crooked so she straightened it up. Something must have caught her eye so she took a quick glance around. With quick steps she moved across the room to the other picture on the wall where she looked directly at me and shook her head.


“A bit too nosy weren’t we, Tom?” 


All I could do was nod my head in agreement. I heard movement behind me but before I turned I could smell an aftershave that was familiar to me.  


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